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I would like to see what areas need to be worked on to get this promoted to A- and FA-class. I had an informal review by several editors at WikiProject Israel in regard to possible NPOV terminology for the American Palestine Line era, and I made some changes based on their suggestions.

Some questions I'd like to have addressed:

  • Is the lead too long? If so, what can be done to shorten it?
  • What are some alternatives for the really long infobox? One thought I'd explored was to have a separate box for each owner/operator, but I'm concerned how that would interfere with image placement throughout the article.

Many thanks in advance. — Bellhalla (talk) 23:21, 15 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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