Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/USS Missouri (BB-63)
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By accidentall oversight its been more than two years since this article has seen any type of community attention, so I am submitting this article for Peer Review ahead of a needed FAR to address any issues that may need to be fixed. TomStar81 (Talk) 22:39, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
Patar knight
[edit]Alright, pretty good article. Couple of minor suggestions:
- In the introduction, US Navy and United States Navy are redundant. The first could be removed, and the second linked.
- In the "Service with the 3rd Fleet, Admiral Halsey" section, 2nd paragraph, the first link to Honshu is in a better position to be linked then the second one.
- In "Signing of the Japanese Instrument of Surrender", the first link to Honshu could be linked.
- Redirect Navy Day in the Post-war section to the correct sub-section.
- In the same section, "both nations' independence.[4]" doesn't seem to refer to two nations at all. I'm guessing that it's referring to Greece and Turkey?
- In the Korean section the "Republic of Korea." is not previously mentioned, and could lead to confusion among readers
- "In an effort to dissuade U.N. forces from completely overrunning North Korea the People's Republic of China", comma after Korea.
- Same section, Link to Mark Wayne Clark ("sailed thence to Sasebo, Japan. General Mark W. Clark,")
Good job on this article, and good luck on the FAR. --Patar knight - chat/contributions 00:09, 29 January 2009 (UTC)