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I would like to see what areas need to be worked on to get this to A-class. Also, is there enough substance to think about FA-class? — Bellhalla (talk) 23:21, 15 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin

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Quite nice, overall; but a few things that might be improved:

  • The single sub-sections aren't really the best thing to have.
  • The listing of notable passengers might work better in a box of some sort, rather than as a rump section.
  • The image with the footnotes essentially turns it into a three-column layout, which is somewhat cramped on smaller resolutions.

Kirill (prof) 01:51, 30 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Responses, in order:
  • Easily removed. (see item below, also)
  • I can easily prose-ify the notable passengers (and eliminate the section heading in the process)
  • Good point. I'll remove an image so that doesn't happen.
Thanks for taking time to do all the reviews that you do, Kirill. — Bellhalla (talk) 14:59, 5 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]