Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle of Ramillies

Battle of Ramillies

Request comments etc for this article. Thank you Raymond Palmer 16:36, 24 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin

Another great article; a few minor points that struck me as warranting improvent:

"Marlburian", while technically correct, is a bizarre enough form that I'd suggest avoiding it.
The sub-section titles under the "Battle" section would be better off as purely geographic; explicitly listing everything according to its position in the Allied line is neither necessary nor particularly impartial.
Some of the longer quotes may work better in blockquote formatting.

Overall, though, this is excellently written. Kirill 03:11, 25 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Victor Falk

Excellent... "pontoon train" should be linked to Pontoon_bridge#Military_bridges... --Victor falk 17:42, 27 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks to you both. I have made the changes, although on Kirill's last point I have compromised somewhat. The long quotation I think may have been a problem I have reduced by half. I think it's an improvement. Raymond Palmer 19:15, 2 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]