Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Peer review/Battle of Cape Esperance

Battle of Cape Esperance

I hope this article is near completion and would really appreciate a review to point out areas of improvement or issues that I've missed in building the article. Thank you in advance for any comments and suggestions. CLA 04:38, 11 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin

Overall, an excellent article, as usual. A few minor things to fix:

The second paragraph of the lead is too long, I think; splitting it into two separate blocks would improve the flow.
The first map might be better off being moved a bit further down, to avoid too much of a stacking effect along the right margin.
The final quote may look neater with normal blockquote formatting.

Keep up the great work! Kirill Lokshin 06:20, 16 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

- Thank you for your feedback on the article. CLA 15:49, 16 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]