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Article promoted by Ian Rose (talk) via MilHistBot (talk) 11:20, 20 November 2022 (UTC) « Return to A-Class review list[reply]

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Nominator(s): Hawkeye7 (talk)

Eileen Collins (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Although I already have two articles up for A class review, as a military person I thought it best to bring it here before sending to FAC. It is part of a series on women astronauts. It is part of a series about women astronauts. Collins was first woman to pilot the Space Shuttle and the first to command a Space Shuttle mission. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:35, 19 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support from CPA

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Just a comment here.

Great I'll take a look into when Hog's comments are adressed. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 18:13, 18 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

CPA-5 - Looks like it's your turn now. Hog Farm Talk 03:51, 19 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Going down to the body. Sorry that it took that long I was a bit busy for school. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 19:42, 26 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

That's anything from me. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 19:07, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I think I have everything. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:12, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good changed it to support. Cheers. CPA-5 (talk) 17:03, 7 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

HF - support

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Will review. Ping me if I haven't gotten to this by Wednesday. Hog Farm Talk 23:43, 16 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I think that's it from me. Hog Farm Talk 02:36, 19 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Zawed - Support

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This is in excellent order, minor nitpicks only:

Early life

  • but her father was adamantly opposed.: Any indication why? Was it because she was female or was he anti-the USAF or a role in the military?
    Source doesn't say. "I told him I wanted to join the Air Force. He was livid. The vehemence of his reaction surprised me. 'You are not joining the Air Force!' He objected so emphatically that I dared not argue with him." (p. 19) Probably just wanted her to go to college.
  • on the history of USAF: "the USAF"?
    checkY Corrected. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 11:11, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Astronaut career

Awards and honors

That's all I can pick up at this stage. Zawed (talk) 10:20, 22 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Have added my support. Zawed (talk) 08:43, 27 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Image review - pass

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Reviewing in response to a request from Hawkeye.

Source check

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  • Move the bibliography after the notes section
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