Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Requests/Tool (band)

Copyedited by atakdoug (talk), a member of the Guild of Copy Editors, on 23:36, 15 January 2008 (UTC)

Proofread by Galena11 (talk) – 18:28, 5 February 2008 (UTC)

• The article's FAC can be found at Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Tool (band), including the specific comments regarding its copyedit needs. Commas and prose need special attention. Copyediting is the issue before this article will reach FA, so any help is greatly appreciated! Johnnyw talk 09:25, 25 September 2007 (UTC)

• I'd like to renew my request for a copyedit for this FAC. There is still opposition from a reviewer regarding 1a. Please, have a look and drop by at the FAC, time is running out! Thank you very much in advance... Johnnyw talk 11:32, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

• I'm on it. Tool freaking rocks. Two One Six Five Five ^{discuss my greatness} 15:57, 3 January 2008 (UTC)
• I can't find anything freaking wrong with the page.... Two One Six Five Five ^{discuss my greatness} 16:08, 3 January 2008 (UTC)

• I've just been through it; I made lots of tiny changes, particularly to punctuation. I'd say it's pretty much ready to go, but then I see it has already made FA. Probably ready to be closed, but it's my first League project so I'll solicit other opinions. atakdoug (talk) 00:17, 10 January 2008 (UTC)

• Thanks for your help. Yes, it already passed FA :) Nevertheless, since I am not a native speaker, any improvements are still greatly appreciated! Johnnyw talk 21:24, 10 January 2008 (UTC)

• Copy editing done; on to proofreading. atakdoug (talk) 23:36, 15 January 2008 (UTC)