Wikipedia:WikiProject Ethnic groups/Peer review/2007
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- The article is pretty long. It's the product of a large amount of hard work, esp. by Maowang and myself, but also by countless others. It is currently a GA nominee and we hope to send it to FAC after that... --Ling.Nut 03:22, 27 March 2007 (UTC)
- At first look, from the lede: "A revival of ethnic pride has been expressed in many ways by aborigines, including incorporating elements of their culture into commercially successful pop music." Other statements are cited in the lede, and since the first clause of this is rather vague, it probably should be, as well. -Fsotrain09 04:03, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
- I'd look into following one of the FAC suggestions, and breaking out the History section into its own article. Scrolling through, this section must have been 3-4 screens long. Wikipedia:Summary style may help. All the information is valuable, but we want readers to determine for themselves how much detail they need. -Fsotrain09 02:48, 1 May 2007 (UTC)