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Dr. Billy Campbell

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I'd like to improve upon this article and bring it up to a good or a good article rating. Please make any suggestions necessary. GA Eulogy4Afriend 18:34, 8 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Yannismarou

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It needs work. Some suggestions:

  • The article must acquire a proper lead per WP:LEAD, and a proper structure per WP:LAYOUT. As it is now the structure is problematic.
  • The article should also be properly cited per WP:CITE.
  • Try to avoid stubby sections like "Personal history".
  • Trim the "see also" section, and incorporate the links in the main text, if they are really necessary.
  • Alphabetize categories at the end of the article.
  • Why is the article's title "Dr Billy Campbell" and not "Billy Campbell" or "Billy Campbell (doctor)" if there is a disamb. problem?
  • Expand the article with more infos. Right now it is somewhere between stub- and start-class.--Yannismarou 10:21, 9 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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