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01:41:09, 3 September 2022 review of submission by LionelModelTrains

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I added more citations and references to the page. LionelModelTrains (talk) 01:41, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

LionelModelTrains, I suspect french sources would provide a notable story of the previous company. Without the history, this is just an article about a re-branding of Toy'R'Us France and doesn't appear to be much notable or encyclopedic about it. Slywriter (talk) 01:56, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Okay. I did the best I could. LionelModelTrains (talk) 02:08, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
If you could help me out by improving the draft that would be great. LionelModelTrains (talk) 18:05, 5 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]