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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I want a final review of the prose to ensure it is up to featured article standard before I list it on FAC. Instructions on how to improve the prose are welcome.

Thanks, Sceptre (talk) 21:30, 22 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Giggy

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  • There have been FAC issues raised about the infobox image in these articles, right? I forget what they were... just make sure you meet whatever criteria it is you need to meet.
  • I think The Doctor should be wlinked in the lead if Astrid Perth is.
    • And then delink Perth and Kylie next paragraph.
  • "when the TARDIS collided with the Titanic" - Titanic collided with the TARDIS, didn't it? I don't think the TARDIS moves.
  • "He decides to stow away," --> "The Doctor decides..." (And after doing this, check the prose in the next few sentences for variety of The Doctor/he)
  • "Minogue during the Showgirl tour, which included Cyberman-inspired animatronics" - what's that got to do with this article?
  • Music tours shouldn't have their names in italics.

That's from the first half. I'll try and get to the second at some point. —Giggy 08:33, 25 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]