Wikipedia:Peer review/Vivah/archive1

Vivah

Hello, everyone, could someone have a look at this article. I hope it's referenced well enough (tried only to take newpapers as references). Since I'm one of the few editors to work on this article, please could someone review for:

POV
Gossip
Stuff that simply doesn't belong into the article,

and maybe, someone could rate it and give me ideas how to improve the article further. (I took the featured Star-Wars-articles as role models.) Thanks a ton and best regards, Plumcouch ^Talk2Me 22:05, 29 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Perhaps you should use the Template:Cite web (or see Category:Citation templates for other applicable templates) template instead of the current scheme employed. And citations go after the punctuation, and a space follows the citation (e.g., Statement.¹ Next statement.) Pepsidrinka 00:22, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Only Fools and Horses is a sitcom and Latter Days is a movie that are current FA candidates. I don't know if they will pass FAC, but their footnotes are done correctly - please look at how the footnotes are formatted. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:52, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I picked one of the many possibilities to reference/footnote an article and used it on the article. Have a look? --Plumcouch ^Talk2Me 22:08, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]