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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to carry it through to featured article status, which I've never done. I would also like to use the reviews here to help hone my editing skills, which after I've created 300+ new articles I think need honing. Any suggestions about content, writing style or anything else are greatly appreciated.

Thanks,

Freechild (¡!¡!¡!¡) 00:11, 25 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I'm concentrating mainly on the highways in these comments.
  • Was the Lincoln Highway built or designated in 1913? Often the construction of the road has nothing to do with its designation as part of a longer route.
  • You might want to mention some of the controversy with the North Freeway.
  • There are probably too many subsections; consider grouping some of them. I also note that highways, while mainly for automobiles, are not exclusively for them; "automobiles" is probably not the best title. It might be best to use mode rather than time as the main way of sorting.
I'm not very familiar with Omaha; sorry that I can't give more advice. --NE2 01:26, 26 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]