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The Office (U.S. TV series) season 5

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to receive suggestions on how to improve this article. Thanks! Gary King (talk) 00:28, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Giggy

Hmm... the lead should have a word in bold?
"on September 25, 2008[1] in the 2008–2009 television season" - might wanna mention the TV season before the specific date; it sounds weird at the moment.
Do you need the see also section since you have the navbox too?

Not much that can be said at the point... —Giggy 02:27, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Bold is not a requirement; many FLs don't have bolded terms. I copyedited the lead. I will leave See also there for now as the other season pages have it there. Gary King (talk) 02:50, 10 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Change 28 in the infobox to 28 half hours.
I agree with User:Giggy, even if it's not needed, I, personally, think something in the lead should be bold for presentation and consistency.
"It will air on Thursdays at 9:00 p.m. EDT." - Needs a citation.
"Thursdays at 9:00 p.m. EDT" >> "Thursdays at 9:00 p.m. Eastern Standard Time"
"NBC has announced that one of the fifth season episodes will air after NBC's coverage of Super Bowl XLIII on February 1, 2009, prior to the The Office spin off premiere." Entertainment Weekly disagrees. [1]
Citations needed for the the title of S05E01 as well as the episodes writers and airdate.
In the references, link The New York Times in ref 2 and change "NBC Media Village" to "NBC Universal Media Village".

Jɑɱǐε Jcɑ 20:34, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done several, will get to others later Gary King (talk) 20:47, 13 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Could you, by any chance, please give 30 Rock a quick peer review in return? -- ^[User]Jamie JCA_[Talk] 00:23, 20 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]