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The Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks

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I've listed this article for peer review because, well, it needs to be peer reviewed to be included in the Zelda featured topic. Gary King (talk) 16:01, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Comment from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

• "and is due to be released in 2009."-->and will be released in 2009.
• Action-adventure needs to be disambiguated.

Everything else looks good. Dabomb87 (talk) 21:09, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Done Gary King (talk) 02:49, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Comment Shouldn't this be mid priority? ISmashed TALK! 15:51, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments Helping out in a few respects:

• Keep with low priority.
• This sentence is a little awkward:
  • "It was announced by Satoru Iwata, the president of Nintendo, at the 2009 Game Developers Conference and will be released in 2009".
• Try
  • "Satoru Iwata, the president of Nintendo, announced the game at the 2009 Game Developer Conference and set its release date for late 2009."

Hope that helps. Randomran (talk) 21:16, 16 April 2009 (UTC)

Done Gary King (talk) 01:33, 17 April 2009 (UTC)