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I've listed this article for peer review because I am curious about whether or not it has FA potential. Normally, I would be bold and nominate it for FAC after my current one is done, but the the last time I tried to take a song article to FAC, I bit off more than I could chew and it blew up in my face. It would be nice if a similar situation could be avoided.

Thanks, λ NegativeMP1 08:51, 3 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @NegativeMP1! My minor points would be adding alt captions for images and captions for the audio sample. Btw, is it Jeff Citron or Cirton? RFNirmala (talk) 11:38, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]
It's Citron, so I've made it more consistent now. I've also added alt text to the image and captions to the audio. λ NegativeMP1 20:44, 5 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Drive-by comments from dxneo

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Please let me know if you disagree with my suggestions, open for discussion.

  • "The song was produced by the bands front man Gerard Way with assistance from Ray Toro and Doug McKean." — according to Apple Music and personnel, there are no assistant or co-producers.
  • "Way wrote the song with assistance from the rest of the band." — again, they are all credited as songwriters (and yes, I noticed the lyricist). Lyricist + composer = songwriter, so it doesn't make that much of a difference.
  • I think it's better to replace ref8 (Spotify) with Apple Music since it's Spotify is highlighted red and Apple Music is green. Not necessary tho.
  • "It was released as a single on May 12, 2022 through Reprise Records without any prior announcement" ===> It was released on May 12, 2022, by Reprise Records without any prior announcement.
    • Don't forget the links since it was a surprise release.
  • Replace "released through" with "released by". Never actually understood what it meant to be "released through". Taking reference from FAs like "Bad Blood" and Red.
  • Ref25, |magazine= is not wiki linked.

I think I'll just rewrite the personnel for you. You'll let me know if don't like it. dxneo (talk) 01:06, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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