Wikipedia:Peer review/Red rain in Kerala/archive2

I'm hoping to get this up to FA status for April 1 (April fools main page) so I would welcome some input as how best to achieve this RyanPostlethwaite^{See the mess I've created or let's have banter} 20:26, 3 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I would suggest that you write up some fair use rationales for the images first. bibliomaniac 1 5 04:45, 4 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Needs an SVG map
Images should be thumbed
Table should be right aligned. A pi chart of the data can be shown
Copyedit required. low content of phosphorus is puzzling , is by no means rare
Astrophysics and Space Science should be in italics
4.1 and 6.1 sections are bad style. Merge with parent or promote to a higher level.
References should be preferably formatted using the citation templates available.
Dr. - remove
Populating red links should give the article a more professional touch
Remove low value linking (eg wells, rainwater, milligrams etc)
Gallery should go, merge images with text
What was the reaction of the local people? I'm sure such an unusual phenomena should cause some sort of consternation among the local populace, even giving rise to superstitions.
The following domains can also be combed for more information: gov.in, nic.in, ernet.in, gov ; and so too google news.