Wikipedia:Peer review/Mining industry of Botswana/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because this is an article that needs attention (old version was 19 years out of date) and I would also like some advice to promote this to GA or A class. By the way, I’ve substantially contributed to the page (https://xtools.wmcloud.org/articleinfo/wiki.riteme.site/Mining_industry_of_Botswana) and updated everything. Feedback would be appreciated.
Thanks, 48JCL talk 01:57, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
[edit]Comments after a quick skim:
- The article feels disorganised. It goes from diamonds, to a mining company, to other commodities, to political influence. I suggest that this be organised by either type of mining, geography, company, or some other similarity in the titles.
- Are there any additional sources for the article? Try looking at WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, or your local library system.
I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:02, 11 May 2024 (UTC)
- I’m unable to access the Wikipedia library, but I mainly use JSTOR. 48JCL (talk) 15:23, 12 May 2024 (UTC)
- @48JCL: JSTOR is a great resource, but there are lots of other databases that also have sources. These include Google Books, Google Scholar, archive.org, [1], and databases available from your local library system. Z1720 (talk) 13:23, 6 June 2024 (UTC)
- great thanks 48JCL TALK 14:34, 7 June 2024 (UTC)
- @48JCL: JSTOR is a great resource, but there are lots of other databases that also have sources. These include Google Books, Google Scholar, archive.org, [1], and databases available from your local library system. Z1720 (talk) 13:23, 6 June 2024 (UTC)