Wikipedia:Peer review/Luigi/archive1

Luigi[edit]

I did a copyedit of this article today, so I think I improved it some. Besides references, what should be improved in this article to bring it to good status? —The Gr e at Llama^moo? 00:44, 27 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 01:33, 27 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I think the "cameos and allusions" should be prosified. ~~The comment about Luigi being a coward should probably include a citation to Luigi's Mansion, not sure if theres a template for video games.~~ There are also a lot of single sentence paragraphs, some compression should allow for a better flow to the article. Jay32183 01:17, 1 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I'd try to find more inline citations also. LuciferMorgan 02:33, 15 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]