Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Super Bowl champions/archive1

List of Super Bowl champions

Once again, my hope is that this peer review is preparation for its featured list candidacy. I just improved the list that was on the Super Bowl page and put it on a new page. File:PhoenixSuns 100.pngPhoenix2 30 June 2005 19:44 (UTC)

I would recommend a longer lead (particularly explaining what a Super Bowl is and what's the difference between the first four and the rest). And it needs references and external links. This'll be a good counter to those cricket lists! --Dmcdevit 30 June 2005 20:48 (UTC)

Thanks; I'll extend the lead and add references/external links. File:PhoenixSuns 100.pngPhoenix2 1 July 2005 02:31 (UTC)

And I'm not sure I like the future Super Bowls, since it adds blank spaces to the table. Perhaps just a note at the bottom as to the future locations (since the table should really be about champions, not locations.) Another problem is the images. Having them lined up to one side isn't too visually appealing, though I can't really think of a better placement. Also, I'm not sure saying the Patriots are the "first dynasty of this century" makes sense begining in 2002. --Dmcdevit 1 July 2005 04:41 (UTC)

I had the images lined up along the side to create a kind of timeline. I'll think about removing the future Super Bowls from the list. Yea, I guess the quote about the Patriots is POV. Phoenix2 Canada Day! 1 July 2005 19:57 (UTC)

Good work! This is a great list and I hope it makes the featured lists. I made some minor formatting changes that I think improved it. Cedars 2 July 2005 12:37 (UTC)

Thanks, I'm also working on lists for the AFC and NFC Championship Games. Phoenix2 Canada Day Weekend! 17:56, 2 July 2005 (UTC)