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Would like to get this to FL status but there are a fex problems.

Madden and Shell and both in the hall of fame and spent entire career with the Raiders but I can only make their row one colour. Also Shell is in the hall of fame as a player, does that count? Shell had two spells as Raiders head coach so should he have two rows? Where to put the "Los Angeles Raiders" row. Tom Flores began coaching the Oakland Raiders and reimained head coach they moved to Los Angeles. Anything else I need to fix?

Thanks, Buc (talk) 19:11, 17 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)

Per the Bucs coaches article, check for WP:COLOR for the table and avoiding identifying particular characteristics of individuals with colour alone.
"two coaches has won " have won.
"Tom Flores in in 1980 " lose one of the ins.
"Shell is the only coach to have more than one tenure with the team. Flores and Shell are the only coaches to coach the team in both Oakland and Los Angeles. Statistically the worst coach in the Raiders history is Red Conkright with a winning percentage of .111.[3] The all-time leader in games coached is and the leader in wins is Madden, Rauch leads all Raiders coaches in winning percentage with .805.[4]" is really choppy, listprose. Merge some of the sentences and improve the flow.
Regular Season should just be Regular season (this also applies to the Bucs article you're working on).
Art Shell should have two rows, splitting his tenure accordingly. Just don't increment the # on the second spell. I'd also split Flores for the LA/Oakland as well. As for Shell in hall of fame as a player, yes I guess it counts, but it's worth a footnote to explain that his induction wasn't as a coach.
- I don't like the sound of that. It was the same team just in a diffrent location. Buc (talk) 18:31, 20 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - Well it's up to you but the team name changed you're not being consistent in the table. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:35, 20 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Then, like Madden he is in the hall of fame and spent entire career with the Raiders but I can only make their row one colour. Any suggestions on what to do? Buc (talk) 18:14, 20 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  - I'd make it the colour of the achievement you consider most significant and add a footnote. As long as all the information is there in way form or another. That should do the trick. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:25, 20 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"Hickok Sports" or "Hickoksports.com."?
Again, be consistent with the use of either publisher or work in the cite web templates.

That's it. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:03, 20 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

comments from Pinkkeith (talk · contribs)

I would put a noted why Art Shell doesn't have a number by him for the second time as head coach. It might confuse some why this is done.
I would do away with the color coding and just use the symbols to mark who is in the HoF or head coached only the Raiders.

Ok all done. Buc (talk) 15:59, 3 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]