Wikipedia:Peer review/List of Cardiff City F.C. seasons/archive1
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I've worked on this article to improve it's standard in the hope of taking it up to a featured list in future hopefully. This is the first time I've nominated an article for this so all suggestions are very welcome Thanks, Kosack (talk) 14:50, 26 April 2016 (UTC)
Comments by Lemonade – Hi @Kosack:, noticed this on WP:FOOTY and hope this is still on your watchlist. Some comments to get the ball rolling (haven't got time to have a proper look at prose unfortunately):
- Worth having a look at similar lists which are of the FL standard. For instance, Manchester United, FC Barcelona, Birmingham City, Malmö. Pay close attention to things that work well, take a look at their noms, and make sure to read the FL criteria as what passed five years ago doesn't necessarily make the cut today.
- I think the lead picture should be more striking, perhaps the FA Cup-winning first team?
- "Cardiff City Football Club is an Association football club...," association doesn't need capitalising
- Riverside cricket club → Riverside Cricket Club
- "In August 2000, the club was purchased by Lebanese businessman Sam Hammam who injected money into the side," reads a bit journalistic
- Wouldn't the key be better above the seasons table?
- Under 'specific' references, Ref 4, Mirror is a newspaper so needs 'newspaper=' parameter
- Same goes for Ref 8, it's The Daily Telegraph
- No dead links or dabs
- Ref 13 and 14 seem to be notes and are placed in the wrong section. Lemonade51 (talk) 14:30, 1 July 2016 (UTC)
Thanks very much for taking a look at it. I've fixed all of the issues listed above apart from the picture. I'll have a look to see what images I can find when I get a chance. Kosack (talk) 06:46, 11 July 2016 (UTC)