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Larissa Tudor[edit]

I'd like suggestions to improve this article. Someone has placed a note on the top saying it isn't written in an encyclopaedic tone. I disagree somewhat with the comment, but think it might be a bit too wordy.--Bookworm857158367 21:32, 18 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comment It's likely been tagged as it has no sections. It needs to be split into sections with a lead, middle etc. LuciferMorgan 22:36, 18 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Comment The article suffers from a somewhat confusing lack of context as it assumes that the reader already knows who Grand Duchess Tatiana Nikolaevna of Russia was and what happened to her. I think these things should be briefly explained in a proper lead section. Also, there are some weasel phrases in the article, such as "is said by some people to have been..." and "Critics say that...", these statements seem to be referenced but they need specificity. --KFP (talk | contribs) 17:30, 19 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 20:38, 19 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]