Wikipedia:Peer review/Landmine/archive1

Landmine

This article is of highly variable quality. The introduction and the section on demining are very good; however, the section on the types of landmines was until recently riddled with spelling and grammatical errors. I cleaned up some of them but I am no expert in this field and I feel that we need to summon one to help. A quick look at the talk page shows contributors cringing with horror at it.

Things to work on:

Poorly written and incomplete section on types of landmines
Fact-checking
Grammar
Citing sources

Andrew pmk | Talk 03:02, 31 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

I made some organizational changes, but lack a background in the subject to offer more in the way of substantial expansion. MC MasterChef 03:36, 12 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]