Wikipedia:Peer review/Kryptonite/archive1
Just a general look over would be nice if we could get the article to GA status that would be great. Also if anyone could help with the section The "science" behind kryptonite it would be appreciated. BJK 18:44, 6 July 2006 (UTC)
- Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Andy t 23:55, 7 July 2006 (UTC)
- Just a couple of points:
- It seems a bit heavy on the use of the words kryponite,Kryptonian,and Krypton. Use pronouns instead and don't repeat things like "his home planet, Krypton" when "the planet" will do.
- Is Kryptonite supposed to be capitalized? The article has both capitalized and non-capitalized versions of both that and the versions types (Green Kryponite). Lowercase is probably better for readability.
- External links are mostly to the same site Yomangani 17:08, 11 July 2006 (UTC)