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Jordin Sparks discography[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to nominate it for FL. Any feedback and suggestions would be great! Thanks, Oz ^talk 22:09, 17 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

No mention of soundtrack appearances in the lead. Done
" and earned her a record deal " no need for "her" or replace "and" with "which". Done
"was then released in" no need for "then". Done
Link "certified" to Music recording sales certification. Done
"As of November 2010," nearly March 2012, any update?
- ~~I'll try searching for more recent sales. Oz ^talk 03:26, 25 February 2012 (UTC)~~[reply]
  - Update: I could not find any recent updates on the album's sales. Oz ^talk 05:12, 5 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"as of December 2010" ditto.

Otherwise, look forward to seeing it at FLC. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:50, 24 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Michael Jester

Overall, an excellent article. Great work so far. I hope to see it in FLC soon. Anyway,
Some references (the Hung Medien-related ones) have lower case letters in the work parameter (e.g. australian-charts.com). While I don't particularly care too, too much about this, some users can be picky. Done
Ref #14: According to Template:Cite news, a person should not be put as a publisher. Done
Ref #38: Use {{-'}} to turn "' into "' Done