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This is a recent GA article that I'd like to see what it needs to reach FA -- any and all comments/criticisms welcome! --plange 02:07, 29 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

  • One thing that bothers me with this article is that the image in the infobox 'looks away' from the body of the text, drawing my attention to my kitchen (which is located to my right from where I sit, FWIW) rather than the article's body of content. Perhaps flip the image? -- Longhair\talk 10:38, 29 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]
    • I don't know... I like the picture that way. Would we flip a more famous portrait just to have it face the article? Pretty good article, though. The reference section is pretty long with only few different sources, but there's not much we can do there. It just looks odd Ambler (or whatever it was) all the way down with a one or two page differential between the two. For some of those (where there are say [sentence](Cooper 21, 22) [sentence](Cooper 25-27), would it not be better to skip the first reference, and just say [sentence][sentence](Cooper 21-27)? Make any sense? --198.185.18.207 13:21, 3 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]