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I recently revised and expanded this article. I am looking for comments that might improve this article in preparation for FAC. Thanks in advance. Dmoon1 05:15, 30 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • I read the first half of the article, and I think it's ready for FAC. I made a few minor changes, but overall it is fully referenced, including with images from newspapers almost 100 years old (where do you find such things?). The prose is compelling, and it tells a story that was gripping in its time, and has had a lasting cultural impact. Shalom Hello 05:43, 30 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 20:46, 30 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]