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I've listed this article for peer review because I think that this article has Good Article potential. The article is properly sourced, well written and formated. Based on what I've seen from other GA Political Parties (BJP for example). I think that Indian National Congress meets the GA criteria. If any editors could led their suggestions and/or opinions to help/improve the article, I'd very much appreciate it.
Thanks, Akhiljaxxn (talk) 05:40, 4 June 2018 (UTC)
Few thoughts
- Many things are unreferenced - headquarters at Akbar Road, Lok Sabha and Rajya Sabha leader etc. I have added some citation needed tags.
Done No more citation tags.Akhiljaxxn (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- often called Congress - I think it is often called Congress party, not simply Congress
- Done. Akhiljaxxn (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- I think Pattabhi Sitaramayya here is a WP:Primary Source and hence a better one is required.
Done Better source added.Akhiljaxxn (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- the rest were of Parsi and Jain backgrounds - how many Parsis and Jains?
- Done This sentence removed.Akhiljaxxn (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- new "extremists" - " " marks must be removed. It is a well established fact that Tilak, Ghosh were amongst the extremist faction.
- One or two sentence about Jinnah's Hindu-Muslim unity mission in his early life?
- He formed an alliance with the Khilafat Movement in 1920 - Did he form an alliance with the Khilafat movement or during the Khilafat movement?
- Gandhi formed an alliance with the Khilafat movement.Not during the khilafat movement.Akhiljaxxn (talk) 02:16, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
- The section - "Congress as a mass movement" needs to be composed better.