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I'm renominating this article for PR because it just passed as a good article and I think with just some minor improvements, this time it can be ready for an FAC. And this time I want actual users offering suggestions on improvement. Thanks! (SUDUSER)85 15:03, 13 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Following the success of Hybrid Theory, Linkin Park received invitations to perform at various prominent rock concerts and tours, including Ozzfest, the Family Values Tour, KROQ's Almost Acoustic Christmas, and the band's self-created tour, Projekt Revolution, which was headlined by Linkin Park and featured other bands such as Cypress Hill and Adema.[3][5]" - The word "prominent" is speculation on the writer's behalf, and needs to be taken out. LuciferMorgan (talk) 13:39, 14 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Cricket2

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Lead:

  • Since its release, Hybrid Theory has been certified diamond by the RIAA, and to date has sold 24 million copies worldwide, making it
...and to date has sold... What date? This could yesterday, or tomorrow or next month when someone reads it. I would clarify....like, as of December 2007.... (or whenever), and update as needed in time.

Background:

  • A bit too many wikilinks of ordinary terms. Also, why does "MC" for Mike Shinoda redirect to rapping? And why does "music ensemble" (band I assume) redirect to "arrangement"? I understand "arrangement" to be a Musical arrangement. I'm not saying its wrong, just don't understand the reasoning and please excuse my ignorance if this is all correct. Maybe it's just terminology I'm not familiar with, like I've never heard of an ensemble being called an arrangement before. Just need a little clarity there.

♫ Cricket02 (talk) 04:02, 21 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]