Wikipedia:Peer review/Green Wing/archive1
Green Wing[edit]
I am currently trying to be the article promoted to FA status. I am not sure which areas need to be improved. An archive of the last here. ISD 20:11, 6 August 2007 (UTC)
Automated Peer Review[edit]
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
- As per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (dates), dates shouldn't use th; for example, instead of using January 30th was a great day, use January 30 was a great day.[?]
- Watch for redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's redundancy exercises.)
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
Allpigs are pink, so we thought ofa number ofways to turn them green.”
- Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “
- Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.[?]
You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 17:08, 16 August 2007 (UTC)