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Geocaching

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I'm looking to get a peer review for this page as a high-importance article for WP:WikiProject Geocaching. We're looking to try and improve the article to GA status, and I'd like some suggestions on how we can improve it. I am aware of the lack of sources in some places, so I don't really need that information.

Thanks, Lordseriouspig 08:47, 6 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

There is a lot of uncited text. There should be a citation at the end of every paragraph, minimum.
IB Times (ref 97) is an unreliable source and should probably be removed.
The "Variations" and "Other sites" sections suffer from MOS:OVERSECTION. Typically, headings should be used for 2-4 paragraphs of information.
"Notable incidents" should be reformatted and summarised so that every incident does not get its own paragraph.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 17:30, 13 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]