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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to nominate it for candidacy as a Featured article (FAC). But, I would like to get some feedback first. Currently the article is rated as GA. I am interested in any ways we can improve the article so that it eventually can become a Featured article (FA).

Thanks, Garagepunk66 (talk) 04:37, 30 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Tintor2 (talk) 22:59, 14 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Firstly, congratulations in making such a huge GA.
Secondly, I would suggest splitting some sections like history which is really big. I remember that when I first started editing, reviewers for FAs insisted that sizes like "369,914 bytes" were too much. The biggest FL I've seen was that of "150,000 bytes" more or less. You could also trim so sections. I hope you make it into a FA. Regards.
Lastly, I would appreciate some feedback in my own peer review if you have time.

I'd like to find a way to divide the history section into two or three parts. The trick is figuring out a way to do it that does not disrupt the flow. Garagepunk66 (talk) 05:10, 15 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]