Wikipedia:Peer review/Franz Joseph II, Prince of Liechtenstein/archive1
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Hello. I am requesting this page for peer review since it was last reviewed as a biography on the Wikipedia's content assessment scale nearly 9 years ago when it was a mere start-class article with only minimal detail. I have since over a period of approximately 6 months improved this article to have a significantly larger amount of detail for which I could find, therefore I am requesting it is re-reviewed on the content assessment scale to be more appropriate to the current state of the article.
Thanks, TheBritinator (talk) 01:13, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
[edit]I updated the rating to a C-class, although anything below GA status is arbitrary. Here are some notes for improvement after a quick skim:
- The lede should have more information that summarise this person's life.
- Many of the paragraphs are short. I suggest merging them together, with a target paragraph length of 4-6 sentences.
- Each entry in "Honours" needs a citation.
- More sources for this article can be found at WP:LIBRARY, Google Scholar, archive.org, doaj.org, or your local library system.
- The information in the article should focus on what this person has actually done. Events that happened at the same time shouldn't be in the article unless he was directly involved with it.
I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 20:57, 1 August 2023 (UTC)