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I've listed this article for peer review because I intend to nominate it for FAC. The article is also currently waiting in line for a copyedit.
Thanks, Freikorp (talk) 10:23, 7 October 2015 (UTC)
- Comments from Calvin999
- A caption isn't needed for the single artwork
- No specific day for the release date (Info box)
- Link CD, remove single (Info box)
- Why are there citations for the writer and producer parameters?
- You can just use surnames for the producers if the same as the writers
- Put the music video external link in the External links section
- There is no critical commentary for the Alternative cover art so that needs to be removed
- "Don't Say You Love Me" is the debut single by Norwegian pop duo M2M, composed of singers Marion Raven and Marit Larsen, who were 14 and 15-years-old respectively when the song was recorded. → For an opening sentence, this is really long winded. I don't think the final clause is even needed.
- The song first aired on → Do songs air? I thought only TV programs did.
- on their 'best of' album → on their greatest hits album
- The song was well-received critically, → Why? By who?
- and charted in over a dozen countries, → Boring/not particular impressive or notable
- including at number → Remove 'at'
- on the Billboard Hot 100. → What country?
- 15-years-old → Do we need these hyphens?
- tracks from Shades of Purple, → Why isn't the album linked?
- , including "Don't Say You Love Me" were recorded. → If this part is to be kept, then you need a comma after the song title
- was mixed by → Link mixed
- the song is said to be → This sounds like you don't know
- They then toured Singapore, Hong Kong and Tokyo → Why do you list two countries and a city? Why not Japan?
- Live performances and covers typically goes after music video
- Reception: I don't see the need for three subsections when they are so small.
- Each section could easily be one paragraph instead of having one or two lines each
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- Looks better. — Calvin999 13:52, 14 October 2015 (UTC)
- The tables need to be marked up for access (the Certification table does this)
- I'm afraid I don't know exactly what that means. Someone else modified the certification table. Can you explain?
- It means when the first column is shaded it. Look at "S&M" for example. — Calvin999 13:52, 14 October 2015 (UTC)
I hope these prove useful to you. Please ping me if you have any questions. — Calvin999 18:29, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
- @Calvin999: I'm so glad someone with experience in songs articles reviewed this. This is my first GA song article so its been a bit of a learning experience. Please have a look at my replies (there are only a couple questions) and see if the changes are to your liking. Thanks. Freikorp (talk) 10:21, 13 October 2015 (UTC)
- @Calvin999: Hey sorry to be on your case but just hoping you can have a look over my replies; keen to close this PR and nominate something else :) Freikorp (talk) 09:24, 14 October 2015 (UTC)
- I will go through later today. — Calvin999 09:29, 14 October 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for your help. I'm closing this now. Freikorp (talk) 11:33, 15 October 2015 (UTC)
- I will go through later today. — Calvin999 09:29, 14 October 2015 (UTC)