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This is an article I started rewriting after seeing it on AfD, but then got sick of it. It had been sat in my userspace for months, and I have only 'completed' it today, and would like advice on how to get it to good article. Specific things I would like advice on- how does the members' list look? Should I include cats to indicate the many formations/breakups, or just leave with the first formation date? Of course, absolutely any comments welcome. Thanks, J Milburn (talk) 00:14, 10 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Now a good article. J Milburn (talk) 15:50, 16 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Burningclean

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I’m not the best at reviewing articles, but I think I covered the obvious points. Thank you for asking me to review by the way. Cheers, —Burningclean [Speak the truth!] 00:48, 10 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

LuciferMorgan

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Comments;

  • "Majewski had previously worked publicizing the band and providing artwork, and had first seen them when their only song was "Shroud of Encryption", having been introduced to the band by his friend 'Hound'.[7]" - Sentence is somewhat awkward, and possibly needs splitting into two.

LuciferMorgan (talk) 10:55, 10 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

M3tal H3ad

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That's about all, good job. M3tal H3ad (talk) 02:13, 13 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]