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Crater Glacier

I saw this was tagged so I am opening the thread. I'll make comments later, but it appears this article needs some more refs and the images need to be less crowded.--MONGO 06:11, 3 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Review by Spebi

The ref in the opening sentence should be added to the end of the sentence.
The opening paragraph (before the TOC) should be split into smaller paragraphs, for easier reading.
The refs at the end of the opening paragraph (and throughout the article) should not have spaces between eachother, and should be added immediatley after the full stop. (Example: Sentence.<ref> and not Sentence. <ref> or Sentence<ref>.)
Try finding some relevant categories, and add the article to these categories. Don't add too many irrelevant categories, though.
Not sure though, but I think the coordinates are ment to be placed in the top right hand corner of the page (along the title line), but if the infobox has a place for them, then they should be placed in there.

Good luck with the article! :) Sebi _[talk] 06:20, 3 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]