Wikipedia:Peer review/Corps of Army Air Defence (India)/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because I wish propose this article to the good article nominations. Please suggest me edits and improvements to take this article to good article level. Thanks, KCVelaga ☚╣✉╠☛ 04:47, 7 June 2016 (UTC)
Comments: G'day, I will try to take a bit more of a look tomorrow after some sleep. The main issue that I see which you will need to address prior to GAN is referencing: at a bare minimum each paragraph should end in a citation to a reliable source. Additionally, there appears to be a whole section missing (where the empty section tag is). I think also that the coverage is lacking. For instance is there anything that could be said about the corps' role during the various wars that have been fought with Pakistan in the post independence period? Finally, a good copy edit is needed as the article's grammar could be improved (I will try to help with this tomorrow). Anyway, it is time for bed for me. I will come back later. Thanks for your efforts. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 15:57, 11 June 2016 (UTC)
- Okay, I did a quick copy edit, but I wasn't sure about the spelling variations. The article uses a mixture of US and British English spelling. I'm not sure what Indian English prefers, but for instance compare "defence" and "defense"; there are a couple of other examples, too. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 02:11, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review AustralianRupert. I request to close the review. KCVelaga ☚╣✉╠☛ 15:37, 7 July 2016 (UTC)