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I've listed this article for peer review because… I've been editing this page for past few days and want to know how-far it has improved. Also, I expect your valuable comments for further betterment of the article particularly in the production and references section.
Thanks, AvRam (talk) 09:40, 26 May 2022 (UTC)
@Wikimama1209: I have checked the whole article. Would you check Basshunter article in return? List of issues:
- 1. "of KGF fame" - "KGF"? I see it is titled "K.G.F: Chapter 1" so the series title would be "K.G.F" Eurohunter (talk) 21:32, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- 2. "Popular Malayalam actor Mamukoya (...)" - I don't think "Popular" is needed. Eurohunter (talk) 21:32, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- 3. "Vikram 58 (Chiyaan 58)" - is it on title or the second one is in different language? Eurohunter (talk) 21:32, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- 4. Word "flick" is used a few times. It that correct? Eurohunter (talk) 21:32, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- 5. "However, since Vikram is also involved in the shooting of Ponniyin Selvan (...)" - Ponniyin Selvan: I? Eurohunter (talk) 21:32, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- 6. "The first single titled "Thumbi Thullal" released on 22 June 2020." - "was released on"? 21:32, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- 7. I think section "Music" should be expanded twice. Eurohunter (talk) 21:32, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- 8. "The release date has been officially announced by the producer of the film, 7 Screen Studio with an innovative video on their Twitter page." - external link. Is it possible to find reference to article than video released by label? Eurohunter (talk) 21:32, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- 9. Is "Seven Screen Studios" official variant of name? Eurohunter (talk) 21:32, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- 10. Links to redirects. See Help:Link color. Eurohunter (talk) 21:32, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- 11. No official website for film? Eurohunter (talk) 21:33, 24 June 2022 (UTC)
- @Wikimama1209: Any response to the comments above? Z1720 (talk) 01:54, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
- Since the nominator has not addressed the above, I am going to close this. A new PR can be opened once the above are addressed in the article. Z1720 (talk) 15:15, 1 August 2022 (UTC)
- @Wikimama1209: Any response to the comments above? Z1720 (talk) 01:54, 15 July 2022 (UTC)