Wikipedia:Peer review/Cher filmography/archive1
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I've listed this article for peer review because… I want to see if it is written well and has all the possible criteria for a FL nomination.
Thanks, Kekkomereq4 (talk) 18:36, 4 October 2009 (UTC)
Resolved comments from Diaa
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- "Commercials" and "Film roles associated with Cher" don't need to be sortable.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
- You should reduce the Movie information column width in "Film roles associated with Cher", to increase status width
- Do u have any references for the commercials?--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
- All the videos are available on Youtube. Kekkomereq4 (talk) 21:00, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
- You have some "Citation needed" tags, please address those.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
- Change "Movie information" to notes.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
- The sorting of US BOX Office has problems because of the dashes (When you click four times it stay on the dashes as first). Fix this by adding sort keys.--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
Done I've removed the dashes Kekkomereq4 (talk) 20:04, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
- What does # mean in Commercials?--Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 16:43, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
- The number of the commercials that she's done Kekkomereq4 (talk) 21:02, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
- Why did u bold the titles on "Film roles associated with Cher" and not the others tables?
- Remove "(see below)" from the lead.
- Could u have a column in the Filmography table for her role (lead actor, supporting actor, cameo...) in the films?
- Burlesque's producer is "Screen Gems".
- Find a better reference than "TV interview, The Ellen DeGeneres Show"
- "This is a chronological list of films in which Cher has appeared." no need for that
- Try to reduce the films mentioned in the lead a bit. Only mention films that are really notable in her career and not every film like the ones in 1987.
- You need to copy edit the whole lead. You have many sentence structure and grammar problesm. Here are few:
- Cher has starred in various international television commercials (see below), as well, she was a high profile print advertising for her friend Lori Davis (1992).
- After in the same year she started her film career with Sonny Bono in the poorly received-movie Good Times[1] and later as a solo actress in the low budget feature Chastity.
- was a lesbian who worked in at the Kerr-McGee plant in Cimarron, Oklahoma.
- directed by Peter Bogdanovich and with Eric Stoltz, Sam Elliott and Laura Dern.
- In particular, Cher, in the lead role, has received positive reviews.
- During 1989-1991, Cher refused many roles.
- She was also nominated twice for the Academy Award but she won only one time in 1987 for Best Actress in a Comedy for her role in Moonstruck.