Wikipedia:Peer review/Brown Mountain lights/archive1
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I'd like to know if this article has GA possibilities, and what would need to be done to make it eligible. Thanks, Geogene (talk) 20:00, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720
[edit]- "Viewing locations" needs a citation
- I suggest merging the last three paragraphs, as single sentence paragraphs are not desirable
- The long block quote is not needed in "John William Gerard de Brahm". Instead, explain why it is wrong or misquoted.
- The lede should be expanded to summarise the whole article.
- "Jerome Clark" is mentioned as a source, but it should also be used as an inline citation.
- Are there any other sources that can be used? WP:LIBRARY might have something.
I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 01:54, 11 May 2024 (UTC)