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Bleeding Through

I have already nominated this as a Good Article , but it failed. After that, I did some correcting on WP:OR and WP:POV issues. I added a lot more reference. I think it's now quite ready, someone could check if the tone is fine now, if it is neutral enough, and if there are enough references. I think the rest is good (images with fair use rationale, etc.) Thanks. Gocsa 18:39, 12 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.^[?]
Avoid using contractions like (outside of quotations): hasn't.
As done in WP:FOOTNOTE, footnotes usually are located right after a punctuation mark (as recommended by the CMS, but not mandatory), such that there is no space in between. For example, the sun is larger than the moon [2]. is usually written as the sun is larger than the moon.[2]^[?]
Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of Wikipedia's best work. See also User:Tony1/How to satisfy Criterion 1a.^[?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, DrKiernan 16:23, 20 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]