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Ben Franklin High School

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I'm hoping to get some ideas on how to improve the article, how far it might be from GA status, and what Importance the school has within its projects. Thanks! --Jh12 23:16, 15 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. The Student Body section could be expanded, because it currently only includes the nationality of the students. 1312020Wikicop 00:59, 16 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

bcasterline

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Some comments:

  • The wording of the lead is awkward.
  • "History" doesn't actually have much history aside from Hurricane Katrina and address changes. Could be expanded.
  • "Academics" is mostly statistics. Could be expanded.
  • Cut down on the bolded terms under "Enrollment" and "Extracurricular activities".
  • "Extracurricular activities" has lots of stubby subsections. Expand them or remove the headlines.
  • Consider removing the "Trivia" section per WP:TRIV.

In general, I think there's room for expansion. Looks like a good start though. Good luck. -- bcasterline • talk 01:19, 16 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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