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Banjarbaru

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I've listed this article for peer review because i'd like to see more improvement on this article. I'd like to see this article has at least B-class quality. I've expanded the article for few times and hope to see some feedback on it, and also help on expanding it even more. Thanks so much for the help, Nyanardsan (talk) 08:52, 9 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Chidgk1

Although this is a small city maybe looking at a featured article on another city would give ideas on sections to add.

Maybe a demography section

Or something on entertainment

So you don't like the pic of the welcome monument on other language versions?

Can you give a sense of anything untypical compared to the rest of the country e.g. if the growth rate is high then why is that? If "Commerce, restaurant and hotel" is high why is that?

Once you have added more text then ask Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors for copyedit

If you have time it would be great if you could you write a word or two on Wikipedia:Peer review/Greenhouse gas emissions by Turkey/archive3

Chidgk1 (talk) 18:01, 10 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, i've added some new sections and more content on it. Also i've listed it for copyedit. Sorry i cant really help your peer review, because i myself is a new contributor and lack experience. But thanks so much for the advice, i appreciate it ^^ Also yes, I didnt like Welcome Monument image from Indonesian language for aesthetic reason, and since better photos are available i changed it Nyanardsan (talk) 02:34, 16 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]