Wikipedia:Peer review/Astrology/archive1

Astrology

This request is mainly to obtain a broader perspective on how this article can be further improved. Any contributions/comments are welcome. In particular, I think the Astrology and science section needs a review. A problem in this section is whether the section is covered from a NPOV but still emphasis the majority (scientific) viewpoint as such. Thanks Vorpal Blade^{snicker-snack} 11:43, 10 July 2006 (UTC)

It looks like a pretty good job of covering this topic, and overall it seems pretty neutral.

• I'm not clear about the purpose of the Flammarion woodcut near the top; it doesn't seem to have much to do with astrology other than being about the heavens.
• The "See also" section seems overly long. Perhaps the list can be organized in some manner and sectioned up in a table based on sub-topic? Also if any of those topics are already listed in the above, they could be removed.
• Since the motions of the Sun, Moon and planets are at the core of astrology, I think I would like to see a brief summary section or table on the beliefs associated with the different bodies in the solar system, particularly their supposed effects. (As per Solar system in astrology).

Thanks! — RJH (talk) 14:36, 10 July 2006 (UTC)

* That's a good point. I've removed that picture. Perhaps a different picture, like a natal chart will be applicable

* Suggestion noted for your other two points, thanks.

Vorpal Blade^{snicker-snack} 16:54, 10 July 2006 (UTC)

• Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 00:35, 11 July 2006 (UTC)