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Ashley Giles

I've listed this article for peer review because, after getting Marcus Trescothick to FA, MdCollins and I wanted to do the same to Giles' article. We have begun to outfit the article with more details but progress has stagnated slightly. Hopefully a peer review will highlight other areas to improve and help keep the momentum going. Aside from the section tagged with the expansion tag, what other issues are there?

Thanks,

SGGH ^speak! 12:30, 9 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Thankyou, I have addressed many of the points given. SGGH ^speak! 10:03, 14 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]