Wikipedia:Peer review/Aishwarya Rai Bachchan/archive1
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The article was copy-edited back in February 2024 and passed a GA review in May 2024. My ultimate aim is to take this to FA status and I would welcome some detailed feedback and comments on its prose and sources as well as other aspects. Thanks. Keivan.fTalk 17:58, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
- I think the career description of this actress is too lengthy and convoluted, mixing plot details, reviews, and awards. It's not concise enough for the general audience to grasp the core information. Wouldn't it be better to separate career, awards, and critical reception into distinct sections? Also, I don't understand why the description of her appearance is clearer and longer than her accolades. Kikolipu (talk) 04:35, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for the comment but I tend to disagree. We cannot create a laundry list of everything and then scatter them across different sections. The article needs to have a chronological order and a flow with relevant information put together. For FA examples with similar structures, you can look at Angelina Jolie or Deepika Padukone. Keivan.fTalk 04:16, 11 June 2024 (UTC)
Query from Z1720
[edit]@Keivan.f: It has been over a month since the last comment. Can this be closed and nominated at FAC? Z1720 (talk) 15:36, 24 July 2024 (UTC)
- Closing PR due to no response to above ping. This can be reopened when the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 06:24, 4 August 2024 (UTC)