Wikipedia:Peer review/2022 Serbian general election/archive1

2022 Serbian general election

I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to get some feedback before nominating this article for WP:GA.

Thanks, Vacant0 (talk) 14:02, 12 June 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Z1720

These comments are after a quick scan of the article:

• Each section of Party campaigns should have a paragraph. Perhaps some of these section can be merged together if they are parties with similar ideologies (maybe left/right parties listed together, or parties by region of dominance? Perhaps major party campaigns have their own section, and smaller parties are merged?
• "The elections also represented the biggest seat loss in the National Assembly since the 1992 elections, with the SNS-led coalition losing 68 seats." Needs a citation
• "Vučić managed to win 60% of the votes in the first round of the presidential election," -> "Vučić won 60% of the votes in the first round of the presidential election," managed to win sounds too much like an opinionated statement, and this suggestion reduces the number of words.

@Vacant0: Hope this helps. I think this is pretty much ready for GAN. Z1720 (talk) 04:03, 29 September 2022 (UTC)

All  Done. Thank you for the peer review. Vacant0 (talk) 10:27, 29 September 2022 (UTC)