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Result: Delisted per below citation issues, especially concerning WP:MEDRS. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:59, 13 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

A GA from 2008. Some problems include uncited statements like

  • However, mixes can vary widely (between countries and often between brands) in ingredients included, their ratio and their quality.
  • Today, hot chocolate is consumed for pleasure rather than medicinally, but new research suggests that there may be other health benefits attributed to the drink
  • ...hydrogenated oils, or fats.
  • Some brands also contain hydrogenated oils and fats, the most common of which are coconut derivatives.

There are also some other problems such as

  • I'm not convinced that the ingredients section is broad enough. It barely mentions any addons and could probably be expanded.
  • Several negative effects[which?] may be...

If these can fixed that would be great. Onegreatjoke (talk) 00:42, 1 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I was intending to close, but am not convinced, so additional opinions are needed to make a decision. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:47, 9 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Looks like this one might need to be delisted. There's not enough information about global usage or about terminology/ingredients (which should really be one section) to meet broad coverage. Its health information should also be subject to stricter citation requirements per WP:MEDRS, meaning that there shouldn't be any citation issues in that section. Thebiguglyalien (talk) 16:37, 11 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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