Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/United States presidential elections in Hawaii/archive1

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United States presidential elections in Hawaii

Featured list candidates/United States presidential elections in Hawaii/archive1

Nominator(s): Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 03:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because I feel that these types of lists on United States presidential elections have a great potential to be FL. I almost completely re-formatted the list, added a lead, and key for political parties. It lists all the elections in which Hawaii participated, with votes and percentage. I intend to make similar changes to all the lists within this series. I would respond to every comment, and try to bring this nomination to FL standards whenever needed. With one of the list (United States presidential elections in Washington, D.C.) currently a FLC, with multiple comprehensive reviews, all resolved, I nominate this too. Check this page for progress. Thanks! (47 states more to go) – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 03:32, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from TRM

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:23, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

*"every presidential elections, except for 1972 and 1984 presidential elections" presidential elections/presidential elections repetitive.

- Reworded – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:16, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"by Richard Nixon and" no need for "Richard".
- Done – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:16, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"received the highest percentage of vote share (14.22%)[8] ever received" received/received repetitive.
- Done – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:16, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"a faithless Democratic elector voted" what is this? A footnote may help our readers understand what this is.
- Done – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:16, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
You could include in the lead the largest margin of victory, it looks like you've covered the narrowest, with JFK.
- Done – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:30, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"[12][4][13]" order.
- Done – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:16, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The tables aren't sortable so there's no need to overlink.
- Well, the tables are sortable. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:16, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  - Duh, stupid me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:23, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Give % to the same degree of precision, e.g. 2 decimal places throughout.
- Done – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:16, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 07:28, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man – Addressed all. Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:30, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from ChrisTheDude

"Hawaii has been won by the Democratic party in every presidential elections" =>"Hawaii has been won by the Democratic party in every presidential election"
Think that's all I've got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:09, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude – Done. Thanks for taking a look. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 12:14, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:19, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from ExcellentWheatFarmer

"which remains the largest margin of victory in the state" -> "which remains the largest ever margin of victory in the state's history."
Otherwise, this looks good! – ExcellentWheatFarmer (talk) 15:50, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ExcellentWheatFarmer – Nice to see you here. I have made the change. Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:53, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support – ExcellentWheatFarmer (talk) 15:58, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from RunningTiger123

"the Democratic party" → "the Democratic Party"
- Done – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"voted Bernie Sanders" → "voted for Bernie Sanders" (two occurrences)
- Done – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Various polls have ranked Hawaii..." – but you only cite one poll, so you need more sources.
- changed to "Gallup Poll has ranked..." – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Inconsistent use of spacing after ‡ – some items have a space between party affiliation and the symbol, while others don't. Pick one or the other (I personally prefer the first option).
- Done – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Gallup Polls" should be capitalized in source 13
- Done – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

— RunningTiger123 (talk) 04:05, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@RunningTiger123 – Done all. Thanks for taking a look. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:17, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support – good to see more progress on these lists! RunningTiger123 (talk) 19:58, 21 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Source review – As with the other list in this series that I gave a source check to, the reliability and formatting look fine throughout and there are no dead links indicated by the link-checker tool. This review is a pass. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:22, 2 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the source review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:09, 3 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:16, 3 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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